Hello Chisom, Mahara and Faavaefou, Ko Jada taku Ingoa... I absolutely adore these acrostic poems the presentation and colors really stand out... Have they been printed and hung on your wall??? They would look incredible if so. You know what would be cool? If you made them sort of rhyme... It would add much detail and fun... Here's my one,
Easter, a time to eat chocolate eggs All around New Zealand fun time is spent Super yummy chocolate to be devoured Treats and sweets, sweeter than sour Everyone knows Easter is the day Rabbits and people eat Chocolate all day
Ka Pai room 10 Keep up the good work... Yours Truly Jada
Kai ora jada ko Azahlyah taku ingoa.Thank you for your lovely comments about room 10's easter acrostic poem.sorry it is not hung on our wall yet but I think it will be it will be incredible.thank you for sharing your one it is really good.
Hello room 10, Samson here first of all i would like to say what a great presentation. When i first took a look at your guys blog I was filled with a lot of amazement and it was really eye catching,but next time maybe try to make your work less static and try to put more animation in it but other wise I really loved your guys work. Keep it up
kai ora Samson ko Azahlyah taku ingoa.thank you for your brilliant comments.we will try to make it less static and add more animation in it.And thank you for your your nice reply.
Kia ora Room 10 my name is Ebony I go to Kawakawa primary and I am 10 year's of age. My favorite part about your poems is the bright colors you have used for your backgrounds it is very eye caching. Your next step is to proof read.
Kia Ora Ruma tekau. Ko Awatea toku ingoa. E haere au ki te kura tuatahi o Kawakawa, he tau waru ahau. My favourite part about your acrostic poems are your creative words and colourful backrounds. Next time you should try using diffrent words instead of eggs, easter, and bunnies. Try some other words.
hello Room 10 my name is Capri I go to Kawaawa Primary school i like your acrostic poem it is so cool your poems are bright colored poem's and your bunny's look so cute.
Kia ora my name is Waekamania and I go to Kawakawa Primary school, I'm a year 8. My favourite part about these acrostic poems are that you have really good backgrounds and lovely colors. But what faavaefou needs to work on is to make sense.
Link to my blog: http://kpswaekamaniaw.blogspot.com
Ki ora my name is Havahna and I go to Kawakawa primary school, I'm a year 7. My favorite thing about your poems was well everything, the coulors the poems and how much fun it sounds to hut for it. Every Easter we have a hut for eggs each year, this year we got 8 small one's, 1 bunny, 2 medium and 1 huge egg. Hope we see some more of your guys alsome mahi.
Hello my name is Kena and I go to saint patrick's school and I like how you can write a different kind of writing but next time you should come up with more exciting words in it, if you want to see my blog the link is down below.
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ReplyDeleteHello Chisom, Mahara and Faavaefou, Ko Jada taku Ingoa... I absolutely adore these acrostic poems the presentation and colors really stand out... Have they been printed and hung on your wall??? They would look incredible if so. You know what would be cool? If you made them sort of rhyme... It would add much detail and fun... Here's my one,
ReplyDeleteEaster, a time to eat chocolate eggs
All around New Zealand fun time is spent
Super yummy chocolate to be devoured
Treats and sweets, sweeter than sour
Everyone knows Easter is the day
Rabbits and people eat Chocolate all day
Ka Pai room 10 Keep up the good work...
Yours Truly Jada
Kai ora jada ko Azahlyah taku ingoa.Thank you for your lovely comments about room 10's easter acrostic poem.sorry it is not hung on our wall yet but I think it will be it will be incredible.thank you for sharing your one it is really good.
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ReplyDeleteHello room 10, Samson here first of all i would like to say what a great presentation. When i first took a look at your guys blog I was filled with a lot of amazement and it was really eye catching,but next time maybe try to make your work less static and try to put more animation in it but other wise I really loved your guys work. Keep it up
kai ora Samson ko Azahlyah taku ingoa.thank you for your brilliant comments.we will try to make it less static and add more animation in it.And thank you for your your nice reply.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Room 10 my name is Ebony I go to Kawakawa primary and I am 10 year's of age. My favorite part about your poems is the bright colors you have used for your backgrounds it is very eye caching. Your next step is to proof read.
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Kia Ora Ruma tekau. Ko Awatea toku ingoa. E haere au ki te kura tuatahi o Kawakawa, he tau waru ahau. My favourite part about your acrostic poems are your creative words and colourful backrounds. Next time you should try using diffrent words instead of eggs, easter, and bunnies. Try some other words.
ReplyDeletehello Room 10 my name is Capri I go to Kawaawa Primary school i like your acrostic poem it is so cool your poems are bright colored poem's and your bunny's look so cute.
ReplyDeleteKia ora my name is Waekamania and I go to Kawakawa Primary school, I'm a year 8. My favourite part about these acrostic poems are that you have really good backgrounds and lovely colors. But what faavaefou needs to work on is to make sense.
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Ki ora my name is Havahna and I go to Kawakawa primary school, I'm a year 7. My favorite thing about your poems was well everything, the coulors the poems and how much fun it sounds to hut for it. Every Easter we have a hut for eggs each year, this year we got 8 small one's, 1 bunny, 2 medium and 1 huge egg. Hope we see some more of your guys alsome mahi.
ReplyDeletemy blog http://kpshavahnac.blogspot.com
Hello my name is Kena and I go to saint patrick's school and I like how you can write a different kind of writing but next time you should come up with more exciting words in it, if you want to see my blog the link is down below.
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