Great instructional video Avei. I think that your explanations and modelling of the steps are clear and I need to get some harakeke to have a go at making a whetu myself. The video production was also very well done with the music behind your voice. You had to remember to move the camera a couple of times, so next time you may benefit from your own personal camera operator!
Yes thank you Angela for that great feedback, and I will try my best to ask other people to video myself so I can benefit from my camera operator. If you want check out my own personal blog it is http://edhillaveia.blogspot.co.nz/
Tino pai Avei, I'm very impressed. You did a great job of teaching me how to make a whetu. Pity it's raining so hard, I don't want to go out and cut some harakeke! Did you know you could edit out the sound of the bell? Here is some help: https://wevideo.zendesk.com/hc/en-us/articles/214824988-How-do-I-adjust-the-volume-of-a-clip- Mrs Krausse
Hello Maria, I will definitely try and edit out the sound of the bell, once I get the time to. If you are not busy doing anything you could probably take a look at the things that I've posted on my own personal blog it's http://edhillaveia.blogspot.co.nz/
Hi I'm Grace Wow that was so amazing how you made that star out of just flax. The video was impressive and i will definitely try and make it sometime. Please check out my blog: http://paroagreygracew.blogspot.co.nz/
Hi I'm Grace Wow that was so amazing how you made that star out of just flax. The video was impressive and i will definitely try and make it sometime. Please check out my blog: http://paroagreygracew.blogspot.co.nz/
Hi Grace, thank you for commenting on my video and I really hope I get to see your harakeke whetu. I would just like to thank you once again and I also would love to check out your blog. Could you please check out my blog that would be great.
Well done on your video, I like how you made a star out of 4 pieces of flax. Maybe next time you could somewhere less windy and leave the camera in one spot or use two cameras in different places to get to view and then use some of each camera
Thanks Emma Check out my blog http://paroagreyemmab.blogspot.co.nz/
Thanks Emma, I really appreciate you watching my video, thanks for the feedback. Next time I will ask a friend to record me, this should help with getting a better view. I hope to see your harakeke whetu, once you have finished it. I will definitely check out your blog Emma
Hi Grace, thank you for commenting on my video and I really hope I get to see your harakeke whetu. I would just like to thank you once again and I also would love to check out your blog.
Hi there, my name is Elijah and I am a student in room 3 at wesley primary School. I really like how you told me and i like how u said the instructions instead of not talking. . It made me think of when i did it i did it wrong but when i watched your video it made me do it write. Have you thought about turning your camera to the flex and it can be more better or not. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://http://wpselijaht.blogspot.co.nz/. blogspot.co.nz.
Hi Elijah Avei here, thanks for the comments and feedback, and I will turn my camera to the object that I'm creating when I decide to make something again. I will definitely check out your blog, I can't wait.
Hi there my name is kotahi and I'ma student in room 3 at Wesley primary school.I rarely liked how you baste it on an a moari star.It made me think of when it was matariki in June the 25.Have you thought about making your voise more lewder and keeping the screen more still. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://kotahikwpsblogspot.co.nz.
Hey Kotahi, I'm happy that I brought a memory back to your mind and I'll try my best to make my voice louder once I make a different video. I will try my best to make spare time to check out your blog.
Hi there, my name is Tamiano and I am a student in room 3 at wesley primary School. I really like how you told us how to make a whetu I copied you and it was similar to yours . It made me think of how I teached my big brother how to make a bag. Have you thought about not to be outside when the bell is ringing it is a little annoying and funny for me. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://tamiano.j. blogspot.co.nz.
Hi Tamiano, thanks for the feedback and next time I will try videoing inside of the class room instead of outside. That's great how I was able to bring a happy thought to your mind. I am excited to take a look at your blog, maybe you could check out my personal blog its http://edhillaveia.blogspot.co.nz/
Hi my name is salati im from wesley primary school im a senor i like the vedio i remeber when i made a star at home all you need to work on is when you speak you need to speak loud and clear and this is my blog is you want to see whats on my bloghttp://wpssalatit.blogspot.co.nz/
Hey Salati I've read your comment and it's great, I will really try to speak louder next time and clearly once a come to make a new video. If you have any free time could you and some of your friends take a look at my persona blog its http://edhillaveia.blogspot.co.nz/
Hi my name is salati im from wesley primary school im a senor i like the vedio i remeber when i made a star at home all you need to work on is when you speak you need to speak loud and clear and this is my blog is you want to see whats on my bloghttp://wpssalatit.blogspot.co.nz/
Hi my name is jairus im from Wesley primary school i like your we video i remember when we did this for matariki day we went to each class and there were six classes and there were one to make something like this not judging you but try speak clearer next time
Talofa Lava Jairus I really would like to thank you for commenting on your blog and I will talk clearer next time. I hope you come and take a great look at my own blog it is http://edhillaveia.blogspot.co.nz/
nice work avei i like the way you said the instruction propaly.And i rember the time i went to samoa and used some flax but it turned into a bag you mabey work on your speaking. this is my blog http://wpssimativaa.blogspot.co.nz/
Thanks Simativa for the complements you're so kind to say those words. I will check out your blog and maybe you could check out my personal blog its http://edhillaveia.blogspot.co.nz/. Could you please show some of your friends my blog? Hope to see your own video of your harakeke whetu, I can't wait.
Hi there, my name is Talaiasi and I am a student in room 3 at Wesley primary School. I really like how you told us how to make a Harakeke whetu. It made me think of a time that I made a star out of flax on matariki. Have you thought about making the same thing but with decorations. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://WPS Talaiasi. blogspot.co.nz.
Thank you so much Talaiasi. That is a great idea to decorate the star I never thought of doing it, I will definitely try that out. Maybe you could show a decorated star of your own and also you could try and check out my own personal blog it is http://edhillaveia.blogspot.co.nz/
Hey there Tylar thank you so much for the comments and I try my best to keep up the good work. If you have spare time on your schedule maybe you could check out my personal blog if you want it is http://edhillaveia.blogspot.co.nz/
Kia Ora Avei, I think your flax weaving was incredible, I couldn't manage that no matter how hard I tried! I think that making a star was a pretty good idea and looks very good.
Thanks Niko, so sorry that you failed to create the Harakeke Whetu, but it is hard to make it on your first go, maybe next time once you get it right you could post a video of your own on your own blog. If you want to check out more of my posts come and check out my blog it's http://edhillaveia.blogspot.co.nz/
Hi there my name is Hingano and i am a student in room 3 at Wesley primary school.This video made me think of of a time when i helped some juniors in the younger classes how to plat flax.Have you thought about making your voice sound clear or trying to make this video have better quality.But great job anyways.If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://wpshinganom.blogspot.co.nz.
Hi there Hingano I am grateful that you had given me great complements, that is an awesome idea about making the video have better quality, I will try my best to get myself free time to try that. If your not busy or anything and if you want to see more of my posts could you please check out my blog it is http://edhillaveia.blogspot.co.nz/
Hi my name is nila and i am a student from wesley primary school.This video made me thought of the time when i helped yonger kids to plat flax.Have you thought about making your voice sound clear.But great job if you want to visit my blog at http://wpsnilal.blogspot.co.nz.Good job
Hey there Nila, thank you so much for the kind complements I will really try and make my voice sound clear next time I do my video. I will really try my best to check your blog posts it's great.
Hi my name is alipate and i am a student from wesley primary school.This video made me thought of the time when i helped yonger kids to plat flax.Have you thought about making your voice sound clear.But great job if you want to visit my blog at http://wpsnilal.blogspot.co.nz.Good job
COOL VID I LIKE THE WAY YOU SPOKE AND I REMEBER WHEN I DONE A VID LIKE THAT AND WHAT YOU NEED TO WORK ON IS UM I THINK YOU DONT NEED TO WORK ON ANYTHING OK IF YOU WANT TO VISIT MY BLOG YOU CAN.
Hi my name is lotu and i am a student from wesley primary school.This video made me thought of the time when i helped yonger kids to plat flax.Have you thought about making your voice sound clear.But great job if you want to visit my blog at
Hi my name is lotu and i am a student from wesley primary school.This video made me thought of the time when i helped yonger kids to plat flax.Have you thought about making your voice sound clear.But great job if you want to visit my blog at wpslotuf.blogspot.co.nz good job
Hey there Lotu, I really do appriciate the comment. I will really try my best to make my voice clearer when I do a different video. Thank you, if you want could you come and check out my personal blog please it's http://edhillaveia.blogspot.co.nz/
Great instructional video Avei. I think that your explanations and modelling of the steps are clear and I need to get some harakeke to have a go at making a whetu myself. The video production was also very well done with the music behind your voice. You had to remember to move the camera a couple of times, so next time you may benefit from your own personal camera operator!
ReplyDeleteYes thank you Angela for that great feedback, and I will try my best to ask other people to video myself so I can benefit from my camera operator. If you want check out my own personal blog it is http://edhillaveia.blogspot.co.nz/
DeleteTino pai Avei,
ReplyDeleteI'm very impressed. You did a great job of teaching me how to make a whetu. Pity it's raining so hard, I don't want to go out and cut some harakeke! Did you know you could edit out the sound of the bell? Here is some help: https://wevideo.zendesk.com/hc/en-us/articles/214824988-How-do-I-adjust-the-volume-of-a-clip-
Mrs Krausse
Hello Maria, I will definitely try and edit out the sound of the bell, once I get the time to. If you are not busy doing anything you could probably take a look at the things that I've posted on my own personal blog it's http://edhillaveia.blogspot.co.nz/
DeleteHi I'm Grace
ReplyDeleteWow that was so amazing how you made that star out of just flax. The video was impressive and i will definitely try and make it sometime. Please check out my blog: http://paroagreygracew.blogspot.co.nz/
Hi I'm Grace
ReplyDeleteWow that was so amazing how you made that star out of just flax. The video was impressive and i will definitely try and make it sometime. Please check out my blog: http://paroagreygracew.blogspot.co.nz/
Hi Grace, thank you for commenting on my video and I really hope I get to see your harakeke whetu. I would just like to thank you once again and I also would love to check out your blog. Could you please check out my blog that would be great.
DeleteHi I'm Emma
ReplyDeleteWell done on your video, I like how you made a star out of 4 pieces of flax. Maybe next time you could somewhere less windy and leave the camera in one spot or use two cameras in different places to get to view and then use some of each camera
Thanks Emma
Check out my blog
http://paroagreyemmab.blogspot.co.nz/
Thanks Emma, I really appreciate you watching my video, thanks for the feedback. Next time I will ask a friend to record me, this should help with getting a better view. I hope to see your harakeke whetu, once you have finished it. I will definitely check out your blog Emma
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ReplyDeleteHi Grace, thank you for commenting on my video and I really hope I get to see your harakeke whetu. I would just like to thank you once again and I also would love to check out your blog.
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ReplyDeleteHi there, my name is Elijah and I am a student in room 3 at wesley primary School. I really like how you told me and i like how u said the instructions instead of not talking. . It made me think of when i did it i did it wrong but when i watched your video it made me do it write. Have you thought about turning your camera to the flex and it can be more better or not. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://http://wpselijaht.blogspot.co.nz/. blogspot.co.nz.
ReplyDeleteHi Elijah Avei here, thanks for the comments and feedback, and I will turn my camera to the object that I'm creating when I decide to make something again. I will definitely check out your blog, I can't wait.
DeleteHi there my name is kotahi and I'ma student in room 3 at Wesley primary school.I rarely liked how you baste it on an a moari star.It made me think of when it was matariki in June the 25.Have you thought about making your voise more lewder and keeping the screen more still. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://kotahikwpsblogspot.co.nz.
ReplyDeleteHey Kotahi, I'm happy that I brought a memory back to your mind and I'll try my best to make my voice louder once I make a different video. I will try my best to make spare time to check out your blog.
DeleteHi there, my name is Tamiano and I am a student in room 3 at wesley primary School. I really like how you told us how to make a whetu I copied you and it was similar to yours . It made me think of how I teached my big brother how to make a bag. Have you thought about not to be outside when the bell is ringing it is a little annoying and funny for me. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://tamiano.j. blogspot.co.nz.
ReplyDeleteHi Tamiano, thanks for the feedback and next time I will try videoing inside of the class room instead of outside. That's great how I was able to bring a happy thought to your mind. I am excited to take a look at your blog, maybe you could check out my personal blog its http://edhillaveia.blogspot.co.nz/
DeleteHi my name is salati im from wesley primary school im a senor i like the vedio i remeber when i made a star at home all you need to work on is when you speak you need to speak loud and clear and this is my blog is you want to see whats on my bloghttp://wpssalatit.blogspot.co.nz/
ReplyDeleteHey Salati I've read your comment and it's great, I will really try to speak louder next time and clearly once a come to make a new video. If you have any free time could you and some of your friends take a look at my persona blog its http://edhillaveia.blogspot.co.nz/
DeleteHi my name is salati im from wesley primary school im a senor i like the vedio i remeber when i made a star at home all you need to work on is when you speak you need to speak loud and clear and this is my blog is you want to see whats on my bloghttp://wpssalatit.blogspot.co.nz/
ReplyDeleteHi my name is jairus im from Wesley primary school i like your we video i remember when we did this for matariki day we
ReplyDeletewent to each class and there were six classes and there were one to make something like this not judging you but try speak clearer next time
Talofa Lava Jairus I really would like to thank you for commenting on your blog and I will talk clearer next time. I hope you come and take a great look at my own blog it is http://edhillaveia.blogspot.co.nz/
Deletenice work avei i like the way you said the instruction propaly.And i rember the time i went to samoa and used some flax but it turned into a bag
ReplyDeleteyou mabey work on your speaking.
this is my blog http://wpssimativaa.blogspot.co.nz/
Thanks Simativa for the complements you're so kind to say those words. I will check out your blog and maybe you could check out my personal blog its http://edhillaveia.blogspot.co.nz/. Could you please show some of your friends my blog? Hope to see your own video of your harakeke whetu, I can't wait.
DeleteHi there, my name is Talaiasi and I am a student in room 3 at Wesley primary School. I really like how you told us how to make a Harakeke whetu. It made me think of a time that I made a star out of flax on matariki. Have you thought about making the same thing but with decorations. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://WPS Talaiasi. blogspot.co.nz.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Talaiasi. That is a great idea to decorate the star I never thought of doing it, I will definitely try that out. Maybe you could show a decorated star of your own and also you could try and check out my own personal blog it is http://edhillaveia.blogspot.co.nz/
DeleteHi my name is Tylar from lake brunner school.I think that it was very well explained and the final product was realy out standing.
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Tylar from lake brunner school.I think that it was very well explained and the final product was realy out standing.
ReplyDeleteHey there Tylar thank you so much for the comments and I try my best to keep up the good work. If you have spare time on your schedule maybe you could check out my personal blog if you want it is http://edhillaveia.blogspot.co.nz/
DeleteKia Ora Avei, I think your flax weaving was incredible, I couldn't manage that no matter how hard I tried! I think that
ReplyDeletemaking a star was a pretty good idea and looks very good.
Thanks Niko, so sorry that you failed to create the Harakeke Whetu, but it is hard to make it on your first go, maybe next time once you get it right you could post a video of your own on your own blog. If you want to check out more of my posts come and check out my blog it's http://edhillaveia.blogspot.co.nz/
DeleteHi there my name is Hingano and i am a student in room 3 at Wesley primary school.This video made me think of of a time when i helped some juniors in the younger classes how to plat flax.Have you thought about making your voice sound clear or trying to make this video have better quality.But great job anyways.If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://wpshinganom.blogspot.co.nz.
ReplyDeleteHi there Hingano I am grateful that you had given me great complements, that is an awesome idea about making the video have better quality, I will try my best to get myself free time to try that. If your not busy or anything and if you want to see more of my posts could you please check out my blog it is http://edhillaveia.blogspot.co.nz/
DeleteHi my name is nila and i am a student from wesley primary school.This video made me thought of the time when i helped yonger kids to plat flax.Have you thought about making your voice sound clear.But great job if you want to visit my blog at http://wpsnilal.blogspot.co.nz.Good job
ReplyDeleteHey there Nila, thank you so much for the kind complements I will really try and make my voice sound clear next time I do my video. I will really try my best to check your blog posts it's great.
DeleteHi my name is alipate and i am a student from wesley primary school.This video made me thought of the time when i helped yonger kids to plat flax.Have you thought about making your voice sound clear.But great job if you want to visit my blog at http://wpsnilal.blogspot.co.nz.Good job
ReplyDeleteCOOL VID I LIKE THE WAY YOU SPOKE AND I REMEBER WHEN I DONE A VID LIKE THAT AND WHAT YOU NEED TO WORK ON IS UM I THINK YOU DONT NEED TO WORK ON ANYTHING OK IF YOU WANT TO VISIT MY BLOG YOU CAN.
ReplyDeleteHi my name is lotu and i am a student from wesley primary school.This video made me thought of the time when i helped yonger kids to plat flax.Have you thought about making your voice sound clear.But great job if you want to visit my blog at
ReplyDeleteHi my name is lotu and i am a student from wesley primary school.This video made me thought of the time when i helped yonger kids to plat flax.Have you thought about making your voice sound clear.But great job if you want to visit my blog at wpslotuf.blogspot.co.nz good job
ReplyDeleteHey there Lotu, I really do appriciate the comment. I will really try my best to make my voice clearer when I do a different video. Thank you, if you want could you come and check out my personal blog please it's http://edhillaveia.blogspot.co.nz/
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